Monday, December 14, 2015

Final Exam Review

1. Timeliness: How recent the event was 
2. Proximity: How close it is to the readers
3. Human Interest: How interesting the story is. Has to attract the readers interest. 
4. Prominence: importance to the readers 
5. Conflict: Stories need to have a problem to make them interesting. There needs to be an issue that the character figures out and goes through
6. Interviews: Have to be done to get quotes for the story. Go and talk with the main subject
7. Research: More information about the topic of the story so that the writer can have a better understanding of the topic and help come up with questions and be able to talk with the main subject during the interview.
8. Quotations: Start with quotation marks the nthe quote then a coma then a quotation mark and then the title given to the subject. 
9. Yes-no question: Don't ask these questions. Questions must be open ended
10. follow-up question: Need more information for the story so you go back and ask more questions to the subject
11. Objective writing: writing you can verify through evidence and facts. you have to remain neutral in your opinion
12. Transition paragraph: Flows between two quotes and adds additional facts and information
13. Hard news story: written where a reader can stop reading at any time and still get the full story (general location or recent events)
14. Soft news story: Mix of information and entertainment (like a feature story)
15. Inverted Pyramid: Story goes from most important information to least important facts
16. Third-person point of view: He, she, they, him, told from interviewers point of view
17. 5 Ws and H lead: In the beginning, is almost like a little summary that explains the upcoming story
18. editing: Going back and checking over grammar and spelling and punctuation to make the story better
19. attribution: the title given to a person after a quote within a news story
20. paraphrase: to summarize
21. fragmentary quotation: not a complete sentence. don't use a comma
22. direct quotation: exactly what the interviewee said. has quotation marks and is word for word
23. partial quotation: like a fragmentary quote
24. Uses of quotations: quote transition style unless it is an opinions piece is needed
25. When to use quotations: after each transition
26. When quotations are unnecessary or not desired
27. Editorial: Kind of opinion story where the whole staff takes a stance on a subject. the people remain anonymous 
28. editorial page
29. columns: run by one person who writes a weekly piece about an opinion or event or anything really
30. editorial that criticizes: These editorials constructively criticize actions, decisions or situations while providing solutions to the problem identified. Immediate purpose is to get readers to see the problem, not the solution.
31. editorial that explains: Editors often use these editorials to explain the way newspaper covered a sensitive or controversial subject. School newspapers may explain new school rules or particular student-body effort like a food drive
32. editorial that persuades: Aim to immediately see the solution, not the problem. Readers will be encouraged to take a specific, positive action. EX. Political endorsements
33. letter to the editor: commend the editor on their writing

Friday, December 4, 2015

Feature Story: first draft

Claire Meyer
7th Period
Finding Faith

How can someone have nothing, but at the same time have everything?

This was the basic question that junior Alec Meyer was able to answer on his two week mission trip to Uganda over the 2014 summer with Austin Ridge Bible Church.

"The people in Uganda have nothing but at the same time they have everything because they have put their faith and trust in God," junior Alec Meyer said. "It made me realize that instead of focusing on the things that I don't have, I just need to focus on being a christian."

 The goal of the trip was to teach leadership within the small communities in Uganda and help in the beginnings of new churches. Meyer was the first youth from Austin Ridge Bible Church to go on and experience this trip.

"Being the first youth to go was an honor," Meyer said. "It was relieving in a way to know that my faith was strong enough for those around me to notice it."

Not only was his faith noticed by his pastor but also by Meyer's parents. For a parent to let their 16-year-old child fly across the country is a hard thing, but Meyer's parents saw the desire within him and came to a conclusion.

"I was really scared and nervous because Uganda is a long way away but I felt like it was something that he and I had really prayed about," Alec's mom Linda Meyer said. "I felt like it was the right thing to do."

However traveling to a another country, especially Africa required some safety actions to be taken. Alec had to receive a physical, get a passport, and had four shots. Malaria, typhoid, yellow fever, and meningitis.

"The doctors ended up giving me two meningitis shots," Alec said. "So I didn't have to worry about catching meningitis."

Alec's expectations of the trip were minimal since he was the only youth member going.

"I wasn't expecting much to happen," Alec said. "Maybe a little student ministry. All I knew was that a difference would be made in these kids lives."

However, Alec was able to connect with the kids of Uganda unlike the adults.

"When you are the same age as someone, it is easier to have more of an impact on them," Alec said. "When you are older and trying to talk to a younger person, it is harder to relate with them."

Alec was even able to form relationships and make friends with those living in Uganda.

"I met a lot of people while in Uganda but there were three people I truly bonded with," Alec said. "There was Simon who was 19 years old and wanted to be a youth leader. I met Pastor Enok who founded the churn of Pader, and finally my tour guide Francis who was going to have twins. We taught him how to play BS."

Not only was Alec able to impact the families in Uganda, but the families were able to impact him.

"If you have a house in Uganda, that's a big deal. Unlike America where almost everyone has a house," Alec said. "But seeing how happy they were just to have a place to stay made me realize how grateful I should be for everything I have."

This mentality still sticks with Alec even eight months after his trip.

"When Alec came back, he was less materialistic, a little more down to Earth and more mature," Alec's dad Duane Meyer said. "It had a lasting impact on him."

The villages and slums that Alec saw opened his eyes to the true meaning of being poor.

"I understood that poor means living day by day hoping that you will be able to put a meal on the table," Alec said. "These people in Uganda had to live their lives everyday like this and that is so different from most people in the U.S."

Yet he saw that through these struggles, the people of Uganda are still able to worship God with all their heart.

"The house were basically bricks and plaster," Alec said. "The plaster made it more sturdy and then they covered it all with tree branches and straw. There were one or two rooms divided by sheets but there were four to five kids per family. That's a huge family an area about as big as a bedroom."

Seeing these houses really opened Alec's eyes to the extreme poverty in some areas of the world.

"I noticed how surprised Alec was at certain points of the trip," youth pastor Jared Carter said. "He seemed a bit overwhelmed by the culture shock and especially when he saw poverty for what it was... brokenness."

Those who went on the trip were not able to provide new homes for those living in Uganda. However they were able to give them something even more valuable then material items.

"The first story we talked about with the children was when peter walked on water," Alec said. "It was putting your trust and faith that if you keep persevering you will be able to walk on water, figuratively. The second story that I did alone was the story when the children ran to Jesus because a lot of the time in Uganda you'll find that the children are seem at a lower status but that is not true according to the bible."

The missions group provided those living in Pader, Uganda with hope. They were able to teach leadership skills that would help the Ugandans put their faith in the one that could save them.

"One of the primary reasons for this trip was to put on a church leadership conference for those who are leaders in the community and are trying to bring hope of the gospel to a people who feel hopeless," Carter said.

While in Uganda, Alec was able to notice how material items get in the way of completely putting one's faith in Christ.

"The people who were poor and were christians, well that was all they had," Alec said. "Jesus was the only thing they were going for. The only hope they had was that one day Jesus would come back and fix all the broken things in this world and in their lives."

This opened up his eyes to the difference between two countries pursuits of Jesus.

"Both counties do have many people who desire to have Jesus in their lives, it's just different in the ways we do it," Alec said. "The people in Uganda have a mentality that this is all I have and I'm giving you everything. Whereas in America we still pursue Jesus but their are other things in our life that we make just as important as Jesus and block us from pursuing Jesus with our whole hearts."

The people of Uganda were able to see that American's struggle too and that most want to help them.

"They think that a lot of the people in America are stuck up and rich and that we look down on them because they are so poor so I had to tell them that that was not the case," Alec said. "I told them that we were there for them and were right with them."

As Alec grew in his faith, those around him were able to grow in theirs. Alec was able to make a difference in not just the Ugandans lives but also his own.

"He shared his faith journey for them to hear and you could see the knowledge they gained from hearing a teenage boy describe his experience and passion for Christ ," Carter said. "But at the same time, Alec was further understanding the concept of pursuing Jesus with all his heart."

This trip caused Alec to look at life in a different perspective. He didn't just see materials and money but rather saw how much he needed Jesus in his life.

"I realized that I just need to focus on what being a christian really means and what it truly means to give everything to God," Alec said.

Alec was still finding his faith but after this trip he was completely committed to christ. The trip to Uganda was not just sight-seeing but a truly life changing experience for Alec.

"When I got home, I felt different inside," Alec said. "Going from a third-world country to one that is materialistic is a very different feeling. I was more grateful for the things I had and this experience helped me understand what it means to truly place your faith in God.

Alec was able to truly understand how material things in life do not provide true joy.

"The people in Uganda have nothing but they have everything because they have put their trust in God," Alec said.

































Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Current Events Quiz 3.3

1. What are the goals Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg and his wife have from donating a sizable portion of their money? Quote directly Page A1 "Facebook CEO to give..."
Advancing human potential and promoting equality.

2. What are the major reasons (3) the state is adding $130 million in spending for Pre-K? Page B1 "Experts offer pre-k advice"

Smal class sizes, teacher training, and full-day schooling

3. How many stories will the newest downtown condo project be and why is this significant (2 part)? Page B7 "Land sale closes..."

The building will be 58 stories. This is significant because it will be the tallest building in Austin and as well as the tallest residential building west of the Mississippi


4. How much money will David Price make the next 7 years? Page C5 "Red Sox, Price agree..."

$217 million


5. Would you eat Texas Trash? Page D1 "LBJ Library letting us..."

No because I can't do spicy/hot foods and it has tabasco sauce in it


Short Answer
Homeboy industries is an organization that works to give second chances to those who were just let out of prison and former gang members who want to turn their lives around. 
This was a compelling read because there aren't many people left who still care about those who have messed up in this world. Not many people want to help those who have caused trouble in their lives and the lives of others. However this organization, Homeboy, is wiling to help these people turn their lives around and become more functioning members of society. 
As I read the story, I thought about how great of an organization this is. I wish that I could do this sort of thing and help people out. This makes me feel as though the world is finally figuring out that there are lots of people that need to be helped in this world and this is the beginning of a great organization. I also continued to think about how this could impact the lives of so many people that haven't been given a second chance and deserve one.