Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Other Peer Reflection #2

1. Who wrote the story?
Ellie C

2. What is their story about?
Their story is about violence on television and ow it is getting out of control. Kids have easier access to these shows and somehow need to be protected.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
"In my opinion television has become an unpleasant experience for me in the most part."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
She kind of states the other sides opinion. She talks about how she is not saying television is bad but just that people need to be more aware of what their kids are watching and also that there are some stations that are age appropriate and lack the common violence in most TV shows.

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean do they ever write anything that makes it sounds like they really aren't sure about their opinion?
No she was not wishy washy with her opinion. Throughout the piece she provides examples against TV violence and evidence that it is a growing issue.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?
There are no quotes in this story.

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
She wrote in 1st person.


8. Can you tell if this person was writing an editorial or a straight commentary piece?

She wrote a normal opinions piece. I can tell because her opinion is stated early on, the intro provides the reader on what the article is about, and the conclusion is a restated opinion.

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